Occasionally on this blog I will offer up personally written "erotica" for your enjoyment.
Please feel free to click and comment below. It feels better when I know what you are thinking. Thanks ! XO So here is the first,,, just for you.
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SECRETS
I watched you.
You didn't see me, but I watched you.
You were lying there naked caressing yourself with strong purposeful strokes.
Your hand closed tightly.
My lips parted.
You ignored my presence, perhaps, you really didn't notice me.
But I watched you.
I watched you until I saw your chest rise and fall with deep breaths.
I began to hear your muffled, pleasurable moans.
All at once your strength focused in one powerful thrust,
And you lay back lamenting the passion lost.
I would have held you in my mouth but I was too shy.
I would have reveled on your fine tuned musculature with my flailing tongue.
I would have captured your last strength in my mouth and together lost mine without a touch from you.
I could do that.
I would do that
IF I had only had the courage to show you my true self.
But I only had the courage to stand there in the dim light and silently watch you,
My lips parted and wet.
MG 5/20/09
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This is the best of the bunch -- poetic, erotic and extremely imaginative.
ReplyDeleteReally good writing here. I like the other stuff too, but your imagery out slugs your narrative every time. You're stronger when you lean to poetry.